Guilt

Guilt

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#15

05-24-2014, 07:14 AM

did a lot of people shit in class when you were in school.
i enjoyed the poem but felt the analogy was a bit off.

having a shit is a natural bodily function. having a fuck isn't (for some)

i do like the ramble feel of the narrative.

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Guilt - by rowens - 05-23-2014, 09:11 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-23-2014, 11:20 PM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:00 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 02:12 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:20 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 02:26 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:31 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 02:34 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:43 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 02:53 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 03:00 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 03:08 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 03:10 AM

RE: Guilt - by ellajam - 05-24-2014, 03:19 AM

RE: Guilt - by billy - 05-24-2014, 07:14 AM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 07:30 AM

RE: Guilt - by QDeathstar - 05-24-2014, 10:57 AM

RE: Guilt - by kindofahippy - 05-24-2014, 11:24 AM

RE: Guilt - by JMSelden - 05-24-2014, 01:56 PM

RE: Guilt - by QDeathstar - 05-24-2014, 08:32 PM

RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 11:32 PM

RE: Guilt - by trueenigma - 05-27-2014, 10:59 AM

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