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Guilt
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05-27-2014, 10:59 AM
So okay, I can read this. Something about it, they way it just carries the reader off into conversation. Feels like talking to someone you once knew. The way you handled the breaks makes for an easy read and the eye doesn't stick, so I started reading at the beginning and made it all the way to the end.
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Guilt - by rowens - 05-23-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:00 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 02:43 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 03:00 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 03:10 AM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 07:30 AM
RE: Guilt - by QDeathstar - 05-24-2014, 10:57 AM
RE: Guilt - by kindofahippy - 05-24-2014, 11:24 AM
RE: Guilt - by JMSelden - 05-24-2014, 01:56 PM
RE: Guilt - by QDeathstar - 05-24-2014, 08:32 PM
RE: Guilt - by rowens - 05-24-2014, 11:32 PM
RE: Guilt - by trueenigma - 05-27-2014, 10:59 AM
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