06-03-2014, 02:07 AM
I think it would be a lot better if you change the subject from 'you' to 'I.' Also perhaps some form of structure and other corrections.
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I put effort into this one.
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I put effort into this one. - by vtsai01 - 06-02-2014, 02:23 PM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by tectak - 06-02-2014, 03:00 PM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by Erthona - 06-02-2014, 03:09 PM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by Jimmy Stark - 06-02-2014, 10:00 PM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by MT-EMPTY - 06-04-2014, 04:06 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by QDeathstar - 06-04-2014, 04:11 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by Celestina Waters - 07-19-2014, 09:07 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by KROD - 07-21-2014, 09:26 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by poetryattempted - 07-29-2014, 10:26 AM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by ellajam - 08-01-2014, 07:07 PM
RE: I put effort into this one. - by KerouacJack - 08-19-2014, 09:11 AM
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