Loving you

[Erthona]

This, a bad country song is,
written by heartbroken twister kid,
poor boy he is, trapped inside his head
he is. "Fucking town."

Try not,on your phone,
writing poetry.
Phone is non-poetic,
too tiny
unless haiku you write on hinny.

I have read this poem at least one hundred times, if not more (I'm just being conservative). OK, now you have written one too, so go write your butterfly poem next (everybody writes a butterfly poem -even if they lie about it).

Tom (tectac) has already given you the hard stuff, so no point in repeating him.

"Yes, love is a cliche" No, just bad love poetry.

Best,

Dale

By the by, forgot to ask, is this a Minnie Ripperton song or do you just need to change the title?

Loving You

Loving you
Is easy because you're beautiful....
Making love with you
Is all I want to do....
Loving you
Is more than just a dream come true....
And everything that I do
Is out of loving you....

No one else can make me feel
The colors that you bring....
Stay with me while we grow old....
And we will live each day in spring time....

Because loving you....
Has made my life so beautiful....
And every day of my life
Is filled with loving you....
Loving you....
I see your soul come shining through....
And everytime that we....
Oh I'm more in love with you....

Sung by Minnie Riperton, or Squeaky as her friends call her.