He's a Poet who Don't Know It.
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(06-18-2014, 06:34 AM)trueenigma Wrote:  my Grand ma used to say back in the 1800's, "he's a poet and he doesn't know it; his feet show it - they're long fellows. her great great grandchildren still say it today *rolls eyes*

Thanks for reading and commenting; oh my gosh, but it's not really a common phrase: what I am saying here is that he is too busy trying to be liked to be interested in being a poet. It was his life as an actor which made
his ordinary speech so literary; and he used that appeal for his purposes; popularity. Thanks for reading and commenting. Best, Loretta

(06-18-2014, 05:48 AM)tectak Wrote:  
(06-18-2014, 03:44 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote:  
(06-18-2014, 03:15 AM)tectak Wrote:  Well, unless this piece is about Dylan Dementia I have no idea of the point but I think it may be about me. Or Dale. Or Milo.Or Billy. Or..or....
Best,
tectak( I can spell what)


Hi Tectak: I answered you line by line after your critiques in regular type so you can see it; I might add, laughing, all the while. Thanks so much; so much good advice; are my explanations understandable. Now, I must know about rims? Best, Loretta

(06-18-2014, 02:54 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  Ok I like you and left you some notes. I'd like to see something a little more real from you, but people do like different things.

Hi Brownlie: Thanks for reading and commenting; and time. I never, ever heard the word "he's a poet but don't know it" before. Stature win; I agree; somewhat awkard, I will think it out and try to make it better. I felt like that line about the stage would give away that he is an actor. Debonair is a word I worked for; a contrast to his age and reflecting his desire for status. Thanks again, Best Loretta

(06-18-2014, 02:54 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  Ok I like you and left you some notes. I'd like to see something a little more real from you, but people do like different things.

PS Brownlie: I didn't understand what you meant about he AA Rhyme. I thought The Picture of His Face was fairly real?
"l shall be free
no.10" by Bob Dylan. Plagiarist with plausible denial Hysterical
Best,
tectak

tectak: really? Dylan? Does this mean the firing squad; and it can never be said again; EVER. OK, you're saying new title; is the poem worth it? Thank, Best Loretta
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Messages In This Thread
He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by LorettaYoung - 06-18-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by John Galt - 06-18-2014, 02:43 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by Brownlie - 06-18-2014, 02:54 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by tectak - 06-18-2014, 03:15 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by tectak - 06-18-2014, 05:48 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by tectak - 06-18-2014, 05:54 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by LorettaYoung - 06-18-2014, 07:03 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by Erthona - 06-18-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by tectak - 06-18-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by billy - 06-18-2014, 09:59 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by ellajam - 06-18-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by billy - 06-18-2014, 10:17 AM
RE: He's a Poet who Don't Know It. - by Brownlie - 06-18-2014, 11:49 AM



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