07-04-2014, 06:44 AM
(07-04-2014, 05:55 AM)vagabond Wrote: a hundred thousand years to go
a hundred thousand years it glows
that´s not a time for us to measure
so we prefer to praise our treasures
we, the lucky generations
we, the rich and toxic nations
spread steaming waste around the globe
will make our children hide in holes
no time for love or life to treasure
while dropping rations will be measured
a hundred thousand years to go
a hundred thousand years it glows
Hi Vagabond: Enjoyed your poem, my only suggestion is that S3 seems forced in and disrupts an otherwise smooth read. Best, Loretta