07-07-2014, 11:56 AM 
	
	
	
		I actually liked it. I found it to be forced and aggressive in a sort of an un-excusing way, like you don't really care. And though I appreciate the explanation, I enjoyed the poem without it, because then I can pretend to understand what you mean, using my own historical/social/personal etc associations. Good job.
	
	
	
	

 

 
