it´s not yet lead

[ellajam]

A person who likes feeling self-righteous. A person who likes pointing out the sins of the world. A common illness of people in their late teens and early twenties, when s/he is in the process of rebelling against the parental units and they see everything as black and white, good an evil.


Wow, i post some poems, and already you know who I am.

People thought that wind power would great, until they found wind farms were killing lots of birds when they migrate.

nuclear is not CO2-neutral.
and the accident is not yet over.
comparing that and the unsolved nuclear waste problem to some killed birds, do you really think that´s equal?

I would suggest in the future to know more about what it is you are protesting, and not just see one side of it. I'm really not trying to be down on you. Most everybody goes through this sort of protest thing, but while protesting and preaching may make for good politics and speechifying, it does not generally make for good poetry.

OK, got that now. Since the only other kind of poems I wrote can be put into the emo box i think I ll have to pause posting ..
Thanks that you made me realize that.

There is room here for all types of poems, the trick is to say it in a way that the reader wants to experience more than once. That comes with careful reading and observing what works, and sticking with the writing process working towards an effective end.

It's hard for everyone, but this a good place to accelerate the learning process if that's your aim.

We're glad to have you, the choice is yours.