07-09-2014, 09:27 PM
I don't feel particularly much for you poem. I don't find it to be brilliant but then I also don't find it to be bad. As someone else already said, the topic of your poem has been written too much on so that what you write almost comes across as boring for me. There are some lines in your poem that I like but it fails to make me like the poem as a whole.
I think my main "problem" with your poem is that there is really no room for the reader to interpret his/her own meaning of the poem. I find that the best poets can often express thoughts without ever having to say it out directly. I hope that you can try to do the same.
Good luck on your writing!
I think my main "problem" with your poem is that there is really no room for the reader to interpret his/her own meaning of the poem. I find that the best poets can often express thoughts without ever having to say it out directly. I hope that you can try to do the same.
Good luck on your writing!