Inspired War
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Thanks again for your replies, tectak.

But when you read "turn a tool, a page", did you read that as "turn a screwdriver or similar device, a page"???


When I wrote that I truly did mean "tool" to be fool; and turn to dually mean "persuade to join the other side" and to advance in time as one does when reading a book turning its pages.



Eg.




Turn a tool, a page.



The war machine convinces fools that war is a good idea, another chapter of history is written


I am absolutely shocked that one could read that any other way. But they have.

There are many faults with the poem, but I just don't get this one.


I would also use the words silly and pedantic interchangeably, given this situation. Perhaps I should crack open the dictionary.


http://www.cliffsnotes.com/writing/gramm...euphemisms


As it turns out, tool is not a euphemism.
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Messages In This Thread
Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 06-25-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: Inspired War - by tectak - 06-26-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 06-26-2014, 05:20 AM
RE: Inspired War - by tectak - 06-26-2014, 07:52 AM
RE: Inspired War - by trueenigma - 06-26-2014, 05:58 AM
RE: Inspired War - by i pray to pills - 06-28-2014, 01:47 AM
RE: Inspired War - by S.M. Bondurant - 06-28-2014, 09:23 AM
RE: Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 06-28-2014, 10:32 AM
RE: Inspired War - by tectak - 06-30-2014, 12:46 AM
RE: Inspired War - by S.M. Bondurant - 06-30-2014, 07:26 AM
RE: Inspired War - by tectak - 06-30-2014, 03:39 PM
RE: Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 07-02-2014, 11:17 AM
RE: Inspired War - by tectak - 07-12-2014, 06:29 AM
RE: Inspired War - by i pray to pills - 06-29-2014, 09:10 PM
RE: Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 06-29-2014, 10:42 PM
RE: Inspired War - by i pray to pills - 06-30-2014, 12:08 AM
RE: Inspired War - by expiring_touch - 07-07-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: Inspired War - by QDeathstar - 07-14-2014, 12:58 PM



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