I put effort into this one.

[Celestina Waters]

The title pulled me in, as if to call out "Read me I tried harder this time." Maybe it is my brain not digesting words right today but I wondered if this was the effort what were the rest like. I agree with the above comments. The line breaks make it flow, the stanzas make the bulk of the lines have a point. Spelling mistake are sloppy floppy.
Good job on submitting. I can't wrap my head around the hidden meaning right now.