Thoughts for the Fourth of July

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Thoughts for the Fourth of July

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07-30-2014, 11:35 AM

I like this one Dale. It gives me the distinct image of the children being fed to the ogre for the sake of the parents. There is something "Little Red Riding Hood" about it without all that allegory. Any changes I considered were just Paulisms and nothing to really improve the read, so I'm glad this is in miscellaneous. Thumbsup

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Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 07-02-2014, 06:16 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Brownlie - 07-03-2014, 12:43 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Tiger the Lion - 07-30-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Erthona - 07-30-2014, 02:43 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by just mercedes - 07-30-2014, 03:02 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by tectak - 07-30-2014, 03:27 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Erthona - 07-30-2014, 03:36 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by billy - 07-30-2014, 05:16 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 07-31-2014, 08:44 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-01-2014, 01:54 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-01-2014, 05:30 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-01-2014, 05:49 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-01-2014, 05:59 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by rayheinrich - 06-21-2017, 09:35 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by dwestmor - 08-02-2014, 01:03 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-02-2014, 01:18 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-02-2014, 01:23 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by ellajam - 06-15-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by nibbed - 06-18-2017, 10:51 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-19-2017, 09:14 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by RiverNotch - 06-20-2017, 11:44 AM

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