07-31-2014, 08:44 AM
Thanks Broadwaybound.
Thanks Billy. Yes Tom has already chastised about the capped words. I capped the wrong words to begin with, and I don't see that it benefits the poem in anyway, so I shall go no caps in the edit.
"a suggestion would be symbiotic, parasitic gives an impression of it being bad from the onset." I think I used parasitic because I was thinking it really gave less back than we gave it, an inequitable exchange. Still, I will probably change it...maybe
Dale
Thanks Billy. Yes Tom has already chastised about the capped words. I capped the wrong words to begin with, and I don't see that it benefits the poem in anyway, so I shall go no caps in the edit.
"a suggestion would be symbiotic, parasitic gives an impression of it being bad from the onset." I think I used parasitic because I was thinking it really gave less back than we gave it, an inequitable exchange. Still, I will probably change it...maybe
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.