When the insomniacs & thinkers

[Alexearth]

Here's a little edit for the time being, but I would want to add more imagery. Please tell me what you think:

Edit 1:

When the insomniacs & thinkers
slump roughly
into the doldrums
of tomorrow,
I flee to the orchid sky,
journey the erratic moments
of higher fields.


Also, I encounter the
grand, imposing
Pillars of Creation-
mystical, as if
the tightened tone of
their heavy breathing
was to reveal
the riddles of the Afterhours,
the still blankness of the mind abroad;
that the whole paradigm Existence was only
the mirage of
a certain detail
we keep failing to grasp.