08-04-2014, 05:50 AM
interesting piece. What results is unexpected in regards to your title. There's nothing wrong with the unexpected. I get a juxtaposition between the vast exalted sky and the both consequential on a personal scale and inconsequential, human tribulations vis a vis the vastness looming above and everywhere. Perhaps there is more that can be written about both the small human world as well as the great immense naftural world in which we(humans)play out our stories.