08-04-2014, 07:01 AM
(08-04-2014, 05:50 AM)poe Wrote: interesting piece. What results is unexpected in regards to your title. There's nothing wrong with the unexpected. I get a juxtaposition between the vast exalted sky and the both consequential on a personal scale and inconsequential, human tribulations vis a vis the vastness looming above and everywhere. Perhaps there is more that can be written about both the small human world as well as the great immense naftural world in which we(humans)play out our stories.Interesting answer, Poe. I have to say, I put titles to my poems only on this forum. So the "unexpected" resulting from the title wasn't intended. I use "the vast exalting sky" more to accentuate the atmosphere and make a contrast with the subtle calm indoors.
Thanks for your comment
Alex