A stranger less fortunate (edited)

A stranger less fortunate (edited)

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08-05-2014, 04:10 AM

Thanks everyone, looks like I need to overhaul the entire thing before it is ready for any more critique. I think this is the result of me reading exclusively 18-19th cent. poetry for the past month or so. Hehe... whoops Big Grin

Heavy editing to come.

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A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by SomeRandom - 08-04-2014, 11:09 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate - by milo - 08-04-2014, 11:38 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate - by ChristopherSea - 08-04-2014, 11:48 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate - by tectak - 08-05-2014, 12:42 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate - by SomeRandom - 08-05-2014, 04:10 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate - by Leanne - 08-05-2014, 04:27 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by tectak - 08-05-2014, 07:20 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by SomeRandom - 08-05-2014, 07:42 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by tectak - 08-05-2014, 08:39 AM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by SomeRandom - 08-06-2014, 02:34 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by tectak - 08-06-2014, 04:50 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by billy - 08-06-2014, 05:30 PM

RE: A stranger less fortunate (edited) - by SomeRandom - 08-07-2014, 01:51 AM

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