The vast exalted sky

[Alexearth]

Thank you Cjchaffin, Qdeathstar and Billy for your comments. Some nice feedback here. I'm really not sure about this poem so they are helpful.

and perhaps this is just me being dense, but what are left speakers? are you referring to stereo speakers here,
and if so, why only left? you make no mention of the right, that is why i ask. sorry if there is an obvious answer and i'm just not getting it, but i'm curious...

"Left is here used as the word "abandoned, left alone" but I see now that it is not that obvious and can easily be mistaken so thanks for the remark

i've read the other pieces of feedback and feel a bit silly because i never got the poem, it was a struggle for me to suss it out.
wish i could have been more helpful

As I said, some ambiguity was intended, so I get that it is hard to understand whats going on (the general point here is that there is a strange vibe happening in a public place). But as I understand Billy, you're not feeling it, so I would be interested to know why and what could be done to make it better

Thanks again

Alex