08-08-2014, 09:04 AM
(08-08-2014, 08:02 AM)Leanne Wrote: "Like" is a weaker syllable than "I" -- reversing the word order will improve the meter. Additionally, I feel it's more powerful to introduce Faust before the generic I.I found "I too" both awkward and "filler sounding". A more natural line would be:
Like Faust, I've sold my timeless trace.