A Sonnet Inspired by Marlowe's Faustus

[billy]

i have no need to reply now but simply because it reads better, i also agree with milo that I too could be strengthened with a slight change. also I too makes me think you're not the only one.

and no worries about what you want to keep or discard etc, it's all just suggestions for yo to ponder. i will say leanne and milo really do what they're talking about when it comes to meter and sonnets etc.