08-09-2014, 05:48 AM 
	
	
	
		I think what he meant is that the ip is unjustified. cut all the filler and awkward modifiers and you're left with a more immediate verse in it:
a wasting body slithers on
returns to dust @ abbadon
etc
	
	
	
a wasting body slithers on
returns to dust @ abbadon
etc

 

 
