A Sonnet Inspired by Marlowe's Faustus
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I think what he meant is that the ip is unjustified. cut all the filler and awkward modifiers and you're left with a more immediate verse in it:

a wasting body slithers on
returns to dust @ abbadon

etc
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RE: A Sonnet Inspired by Marlowe's Faustus - by trueenigma - 08-09-2014, 05:48 AM



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