08-26-2014, 07:13 PM
Folks really need to read through the entire thread to see the effort put forth by crow and observe how work-shopping a poem can/should proceed. He essentially made to make me re-think/justify nearly every line.
This is a perfect example of the mentoring thread that milo first established. Moreover, the end result was more than satisfying for me. It should be noted several others critique/collaborated productively with me as well.
Post, critique, edit...it works. Thank you/Chris
This is a perfect example of the mentoring thread that milo first established. Moreover, the end result was more than satisfying for me. It should be noted several others critique/collaborated productively with me as well.
Post, critique, edit...it works. Thank you/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris