08-27-2014, 12:02 AM
chris, i completely agree with you (chris x 2 = 
)
crow did the same recently with one of my posts
and it made me rethink the entire poem as well.
this is EXACTLY why i sought out a site like this
where i could get more feedback than "i like it"
which, while ego-boosting, does little
to help me hone my craft.
i want to learn. i want to grow. i want to take cliches
and turn them on their head, make them new.
detailed critique like the above example is essential for that to happen, imho.
)crow did the same recently with one of my posts
and it made me rethink the entire poem as well.
this is EXACTLY why i sought out a site like this
where i could get more feedback than "i like it"
which, while ego-boosting, does little
to help me hone my craft.
i want to learn. i want to grow. i want to take cliches
and turn them on their head, make them new.
detailed critique like the above example is essential for that to happen, imho.