An Ill-Thought Expedition
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at first when he slipped i thought he fell off the bridge, and it was lighter for that fact. but i see he set it on fire. that was my mistake, not yours. but i have to admit i think it kind of funnier if he fell off the bridge! LOL anyway it is like a tiny little story. and sort of like a tease and i'd rather read more. like, the whole short story it really could be, being there must be a huge imagination behind that tiny little injustice of it. keep it up.
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An Ill-Thought Expedition - by SilverMire - 08-19-2014, 07:39 PM
RE: An Ill-Thought Expedition - by billy - 08-19-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: An Ill-Thought Expedition - by UberWilhelm - 08-19-2014, 11:31 PM
RE: An Ill-Thought Expedition - by danny_ - 08-28-2014, 12:18 PM



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