Senryu 26.08.14

Senryu 26.08.14

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08-29-2014, 02:34 AM

(08-27-2014, 02:58 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: out walking late
a man screams at his dog
to be quiet

What matter if it's the writer, narrator, man, dog, Emily Dickinson, or all-of-the-above?
The added possibilities (ambiguity) make for a richer poem.

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Senryu 26.08.14 - by Magpie - 08-27-2014, 02:58 AM

RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by ellajam - 08-27-2014, 10:38 AM

RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by rayheinrich - 08-29-2014, 02:34 AM

RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by Magpie - 08-29-2014, 11:36 AM

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