Senryu 26.08.14
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(08-29-2014, 02:36 AM)fogglethorpe Wrote:  Normally, haiku is free from literary devices like ambiguity, metaphor, etc. But it's not a deal breaker.

A few haiku from master Issa seem to disagree:

the mother eats
the bitter parts -
mountain persimmons

this world of dew
is only a world of dew -
and yet

the spring rain -
a little girl teaches
the cat to dance

my old home
everywhere I touch -
thorns

                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Senryu 26.08.14 - by Magpie - 08-27-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by Tiger the Lion - 08-27-2014, 09:20 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by ellajam - 08-27-2014, 10:38 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by rayheinrich - 08-29-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by Magpie - 08-29-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by rayheinrich - 08-31-2014, 07:43 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by billy - 08-31-2014, 06:22 PM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-01-2014, 04:38 AM
RE: Senryu 26.08.14 - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 01:56 AM



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