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09-04-2014, 02:13 AM
thank you Todd, quite a good crit. agree with everything, really, and posted a revision (3rd). this is really getting molded like clay and taking better form, but most importantly teaching me to be aware of things i normally am not. if the poem never is any good i at least learned a lot.
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RE: I Notice - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2014, 12:53 AM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 08:37 AM
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RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-03-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: I Notice - by ThePinsir - 09-04-2014, 12:26 AM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 12:49 AM
RE: I Notice - by Todd - 09-04-2014, 01:44 AM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 02:13 AM
RE: I Notice - by Todd - 09-04-2014, 04:06 AM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 05:09 AM
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RE: I Notice - by makeshift - 09-05-2014, 12:57 PM
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RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-05-2014, 08:07 PM
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RE: I Notice - by billy - 09-05-2014, 08:49 PM
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RE: I Notice - by billy - 09-05-2014, 09:00 PM
RE: I Notice - by Todd - 09-05-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-05-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: I Notice - by bena - 09-06-2014, 12:46 AM
RE: I Notice - by danny_ - 09-06-2014, 01:05 AM
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