I have some poems with over a hundred revisions. I wouldn't let it worry you.
Just read the revision,
"The chop" is a solid word choice. I like the alliteration in that line.
I can't think of any other immediate revisions.
You've made some interesting choices, and it feels like the poem is improved by them.
Just read the revision,
"The chop" is a solid word choice. I like the alliteration in that line.
I can't think of any other immediate revisions.
You've made some interesting choices, and it feels like the poem is improved by them.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson