I Notice

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Your poem has a calm and delicate atmosphere that I enjoyed, left my 2cents below. Thnx for sharing ^^

Pen strokes roll like ocean waves This kinda reminds me of chinese ink paintings, I like it.
on rock-sitting evenings, I wonder if maybe a comma isnt the best punctuation here
coal-gray clouds against the salmon sky. These colors r pretty together
The chop gently claps for me chop is a bit too violent with gently
far out to hazed shores.

Carried on the salty wind,
you are a whisper through the window screen; The image here is nice and the sentence is real smooth to say, which works with the ambience and all. ^^
the background to a candle-lit dinner
escaping as the last light does
from notice.

But I notice
you, quiet as the grassy seaside.
You listen as you write, you could probably drop one you between these two lines. Im guessing the emphasis is intentional, but im not sure how i feel about it.
watched by a faint moon.