09-05-2014, 08:14 PM
(09-05-2014, 08:07 PM)danny_ Wrote: thank you ellajam, makeshift.It's your poem, it's assumed that you will sort through the comments and use them or not based on your own vision for it. Nothing wrong with being stubborn about doing what you think is best.
some comments i agree with, some i really couldn't, if you'll pardon my stubbornness. i made some changes after some consideration, thank you again.
(revision 5 posted)
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