I Notice

[danny_]

heya bena, thanks for the comment. you're right. i've been through two stages for writing a short poem. first was doing the dance where the title is always the first line of the poem. but then i flung that idea and tried to make sense with the title wrapping the poem together. titles on short pieces are makin' me scratch my whiskers.. except i just shaved. but a very worthwhile notice on your part. maybe one day i'll get struck by lightning and have an excellent solution.