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Todd, your crits rock.. that's all i can say. it's true, it's pretty and forgettable. that phrase is insightful because i know it's true of a lot of my scribbles over the years. nothing wrong with that, but the better poetry reaches deeper into the human element i think. should be an obvious thing, when i think about it. thank you
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