When Day is Through
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JM,

Well, I must admit the picture I drew I thought was better than the poem. However in my defense, the last two lines are not exact repetition, as one starts with "them" and one starts with "So". Hysterical

However, If you got self pity from this, then the poem failed. He is not bewailing his lot, just acknowledging that his end is what you get when you live a selfish life. 


WJ, Sorry didn't catch your not on Cohen. Now that you mention it, it does look a lot like him, however, I had not seen a picture of him before I drew this face. I actually didn't know about him (I'm embarrassed to say), until I heard his song on one of the Shrek movies.


Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-16-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: When Day is Through - by Wjames - 09-17-2014, 04:16 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-17-2014, 07:38 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by just mercedes - 09-17-2014, 09:48 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-18-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by ellajam - 09-18-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-18-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by Tiger the Lion - 09-18-2014, 06:54 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-18-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by billy - 09-18-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: When Day is Through - by Erthona - 09-19-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: When Day is Through - by ellajam - 09-19-2014, 11:27 PM



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