09-19-2014, 12:55 PM 
	
	
	
		edit posted. i chucked most of the original first two strophes and replaced them with an actual memory 
that i hope serves to paint a better picture.
still struggling with a better title though...suggestions are welcome!
	
	
	
that i hope serves to paint a better picture.
still struggling with a better title though...suggestions are welcome!

 

 
