"Haiku" on a brook trout

"Haiku" on a brook trout

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09-24-2014, 12:47 AM

(09-23-2014, 06:19 AM)alatos Wrote: I unhook
the mottled miracle
gulping in my palm.

I found the word choices too heavy for a haiku, especially 'mottled miracle' and 'gulping'.

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"Haiku" on a brook trout - by alatos - 09-23-2014, 06:19 AM

RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by just mercedes - 09-23-2014, 07:31 AM

RE: "Haiku" on a brook trout - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 12:47 AM

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