"Haiku" on a brook trout

[Magpie]

I agree that 'miracle' is too much of an abstract term for a haiku. Though I do like the image here and think that there is definite potential in it. I'm also thinking that it's not necessary to use 'mottled' and 'I unhook' is too personal for a haiku but you could say 'unhooking' which portrays the same thing as a scene from a more neutral perspective.
Just a couple of thoughts... As I say I do like the image and definitely think it could work.

Mark