09-28-2014, 12:29 AM 
	
	
	
		Thank you guys for the comments. This poem was in fact about a storm and not a metaphor for something, it was written right after a date i had got rained out and i tried to imagine a worst case scenario. I do admit that the imagery is kind of weak after "we battle the elements" , but hey, you have to learn.
	
	
	
	

