lanterne poem
#1
 
Pearls
 
hands
cradle
smooth trinkets
born from Mother’s
tears
 
he
rolls them
in rough palms
contemplating
life
 
and
wishing
he had more
time to spend with
her
 
 
 
 
*this is a lanterne, a cinquain derivative. 
the form is five lines of 1/2/3/4/1. 
one school of thought says that each line 
should be able to stand on its own 
but I find that a bit too restrictive. 
you can have a chain of lanternes or just one strophe
 
 
 
 
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lanterne poem - by cjchaffin - 09-28-2014, 05:08 AM
RE: lanterne poem - by Erthona - 09-28-2014, 09:21 AM
RE: lanterne poem - by cjchaffin - 09-28-2014, 10:47 AM
RE: lanterne poem - by Tamara - 09-28-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: lanterne poem - by Mwaba don - 09-29-2014, 05:41 AM
RE: lanterne poem - by Erthona - 09-29-2014, 07:34 PM
RE: lanterne poem - by cjchaffin - 09-30-2014, 12:59 AM



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