09-28-2014, 05:08 AM 
	
	
	Pearls
 hands
cradle
smooth trinkets
born from Mother’s
tears
he
rolls them
in rough palms
contemplating
life
and
wishing
he had more
time to spend with
her
*this is a lanterne, a cinquain derivative.
the form is five lines of 1/2/3/4/1.
one school of thought says that each line
should be able to stand on its own
but I find that a bit too restrictive.
you can have a chain of lanternes or just one strophe

 

 
