haiku/senryu

[haikutec]

Hi Tamara,

they all have the same concept. so i thought of posting them together instead of having separate posts and take up the space.

whirlpool

deep and unfathomable

your eyes

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blue iris

our gazes

mingle

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midnight blue

the love in

his eyes

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aquamarine

the sea in

my palm

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blue

the green in

my turquoise ring

These are lovely. They could work as potential lines for a tanka. Have you tried tanka poetry?

Tanka are five line poems grounded in concrete images infused with lyric intensity.

warm regards.