10-05-2014, 04:20 PM
(09-09-2013, 08:17 AM)Bunx Wrote: Cement blocks underneath torn sneakers.I really liked the imagery.
Breathing air thicker than dust. Visceral, I like.
I stumble as I rust.
Decaying into a withering sidewalk elm,
alive on the top
with death beneath. Death and Beneath clash on my lisp, perhaps 'under'?
Rubble between my eyes
strolling through deaths
gaze I realize.
Dreams are only as they seem.
Meaning is deaths shadow
in the meadow of failure. Fucking love the concept of a meadow of failure.
Your delusion, a snare.
