Tryst

[Tamara]

The slag adjusted her bodice
at his cottage in the countryside.
Raindrops swelled and rolled
down the mud wall a clump of wildflowers
wilted, and left behind a tainted remnant
from the monsoon of his warm breath.

works well. good idea to remove 'in front of the mirror'. now have to think of a new title. blah, i am not good at it.

Thank you, Billy.