10-10-2014, 09:57 AM 
	
	
	
		I'm new and I don't really know how to "critique" things because I don't really know all the rules of poetry..  I probably sound really dumb but anyway I really like this poem if that means anything to you
  I probably sound really dumb but anyway I really like this poem if that means anything to you   
	
	
	
 I probably sound really dumb but anyway I really like this poem if that means anything to you
  I probably sound really dumb but anyway I really like this poem if that means anything to you   
	
Babe you're on fire
	

 

 
