Compensations

[SimikPK]

Um, well, the only thing I can say is that a few lines state things so easily. Maybe you could make it a bit more subtle

Hello and welcome. Before the moderators catch you, I should warn you that this is not valid feedback. It is not specific. Which lines state which things so easily? Imagine you were given such feedback to your poem. Would you be any wiser? We try here to help each othe improve, so please, try saying things in a helpful way, and, lastly, have a nice day.