11-10-2014, 11:07 PM 
	
	
	
		I'll give it one more try on the yawning line because because it makes no sense to anyone but you.  This is great, if you are the only audience, but once you post something (or publish) readers SHOULD be able to follow your logic. 
she made a suggestion---->
blahblahblah
BTW I looked up your threads and posts, 112-----some were revised,. but all you of your posts were on your own threads.
that's not gonna suffice here, you're supposed to crit as much as you post, if not more.
Expect no more critiques from me.
mel.
	
	
	
she made a suggestion---->
blahblahblah
BTW I looked up your threads and posts, 112-----some were revised,. but all you of your posts were on your own threads.
that's not gonna suffice here, you're supposed to crit as much as you post, if not more.
Expect no more critiques from me.
mel.

 

