11-13-2014, 02:45 AM 
	
	
	
		Tom,
I am fairly sure I have already and recently commented on this as I see you have removed the "soundless air" part of the second stanza. Is the other one somewhere else or did you just wipe it?
dale
	
	
I am fairly sure I have already and recently commented on this as I see you have removed the "soundless air" part of the second stanza. Is the other one somewhere else or did you just wipe it?
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
	
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

 

 
