gravity
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thanks for all critics above.
i tried an edit. don´t like the last line myself, but I can´t think of a better one.



gravity


what´s heavy was light
and the other way round
massive rock will be ground
and to stardust be turned

in space and time
all is floating apart
but there´s a subtle embrace
that acts endlessly far

to draw atoms together
melding new suns
then one way or another
they finish to burn

only to burst
by the weight of their cores
circle turning forever
universe making love
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gravity - by vagabond - 11-19-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: gravity - by Wjames - 11-19-2014, 03:06 AM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 11-19-2014, 03:45 AM
RE: gravity - by azure - 11-20-2014, 12:03 AM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 11-21-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: gravity - by tectak - 11-21-2014, 03:19 AM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 11-21-2014, 04:43 AM
RE: gravity - by Erthona - 11-23-2014, 04:02 AM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 11-23-2014, 10:33 PM
RE: gravity - by Erthona - 11-24-2014, 11:25 AM
RE: gravity - by lock1 - 11-24-2014, 02:57 PM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 06:03 PM
RE: gravity - by FountainPen97 - 05-12-2017, 11:24 AM
RE: gravity - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 01:57 PM



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