Who's at the door?
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(11-21-2014, 03:13 AM)Namyh Wrote:  Keith - Oh this goes straight to the heartstrings. I really enjoyed this and its visual. Very nice rhythm and rhyme Keith. Namyh
Hi Namyh
Glad you enjoyed the poem, thank you for your comments. keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-07-2014, 08:20 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Erthona - 11-07-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-08-2014, 08:31 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-10-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by billy - 11-08-2014, 08:25 PM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-10-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by cidermaid - 11-08-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-10-2014, 06:22 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Bunx - 11-09-2014, 02:42 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-10-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by justcloudy - 11-10-2014, 06:24 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-10-2014, 06:29 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Tylerc1988 - 11-10-2014, 07:32 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-11-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Pious Baloney - 11-11-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: Who's at the door? - by justcloudy - 11-12-2014, 01:26 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-12-2014, 09:02 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by SimikPK - 11-12-2014, 06:33 PM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-12-2014, 09:01 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Namyh - 11-21-2014, 03:13 AM
RE: Who's at the door? - by Keith - 11-23-2014, 02:26 AM



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