First draft. First attempt on Anacreontic verse

[tectak]

I was using this for reference, http://www.webexhibits.org/poetry/explor...round.html

http://www.webexhibits.org/poetry/explor...mples.html

It's a first draft. (i assume lines can have 2-5 syllables, i'm not sure about this form. Do guide me if you know anything about it)

tense breathing
inhale
mixed odours
of fresh wall paint
and coffee
daze
moments unrestful
floating
nervous gazes
shifting
of nebulous
where words
letters and phrases
become shadows
possibilities
become spirits
untouchable
and the coffee
leaves its last steam
to be merged
into nothingness

...to be continued.  
i don't think it fits in the form? But at least I started something.

Did you notice the punctuation?
No. Thought not. Yours has none.
Good start. You conceptualise well. There is more to poetry.
Best,
edit it,
tectak