11-23-2014, 10:33 PM
thanx tektak and earthona for your help. I will try to learn from reading english poems.
that gravity poem doesn´t make sense astrophysically and probably never will.
Against your advice, dale, I tried another edit. don´t be offended. if you give up commenting i ll understand
but thats not what i want.
the last line is flat, i know. still it is supposed to be the message behind the poem.
gravity
Space is expanding in time,
so we are floating apart.
But there is a subtle embrace
that acts on us endlessly far.
Drawing atoms together,
life-giving new suns.
But as energy escapes they finish to burn
and will be ground to star dust again.
Even black holes are exploding
till the weight of their cores
is dispersed against gravity´s force.
attraction always seems to be lost.
that gravity poem doesn´t make sense astrophysically and probably never will.
Against your advice, dale, I tried another edit. don´t be offended. if you give up commenting i ll understand
but thats not what i want.the last line is flat, i know. still it is supposed to be the message behind the poem.
gravity
Space is expanding in time,
so we are floating apart.
But there is a subtle embrace
that acts on us endlessly far.
Drawing atoms together,
life-giving new suns.
But as energy escapes they finish to burn
and will be ground to star dust again.
Even black holes are exploding
till the weight of their cores
is dispersed against gravity´s force.
attraction always seems to be lost.