Black Sand Beach

[Dymun Fengshui]

Cement blocks underneath torn sneakers.
Breathing air thicker than dust.
I stumble as I rust.

Decaying into a withering sidewalk elm,
alive on the top
with death beneath.

Rubble between my eyes
strolling through deaths
gaze I realize.

Dreams are only as they seem.
Meaning is deaths shadow
in the meadow of failure.
Your delusion, a snare.

I really like this poem. It is very applicable to current situations. I would like the second line better if it read "Breathing air thick as dust."

and in S4 I would prefer "Dreams aren't as they seem" I believe that it would fit your message better. or perhaps I am not fully understanding.